Posted by:
Human
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Date: October 21, 2014 02:20PM
Please don't read more into the following than as an exercise in...ummm..."literal criticism".
What is wrong with this recasting of your paragraph?
Your paragraph:
> As a student of the Holocaust, I note that Germany
> in the 20s was entrenched with anti-Semitic
> attitudes. Notwithstanding, Jews enjoyed basic
> social rights. It was only when this
> anti-Semitism was institutionalized that the
> social groundwork for the Holocaust was
> established and flourished. In my view, at the
> point of institutionalization, and a corresponding
> ideological social commitment of intolerence and
> violence, even before any overt act of violence,
> it was justifiable to eliminate Nazism, and any
> individuals who physically associated themselves
> with that organization--whether they personally
> committed acts of violence or not.
A recasting:
As a student of the Holocaust, I note that *America*
in the *2000s* was entrenched with *Islamophobic*
attitudes. Notwithstanding, *Muslims* enjoyed basic
social rights. It was only when this
*Islamophobia* was institutionalized that the
social groundwork for the Holocaust was
established and flourished. In my view, at the
point of institutionalization, and a corresponding
ideological social commitment of intolerence and
violence, even before any overt act of violence,
it was justifiable to eliminate *Neo-conism*, and any
individuals who physically associated themselves
with that organization--whether they personally
committed acts of violence or not.
In my opinion, the most important lesson of the Holocaust is that the seeds of Nazism were planted in the permissive, liberal social-political climate of the Weimer Republic.
Human
-->Just one example of institutionalized Islamophobia:
http://www.wired.com/2011/09/fbi-muslims-radical/all/1