Posted by:
The Man in Black
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Date: July 11, 2011 06:19PM
I'm not taking a side. I'm just going to point out some things I noticed months ago and why I didn't read Stormy stuff in detail until now.
1. Every single one of you comma splice in exactly the same way. You put a comma where a new sentence should begin or should use a semicolon.
2. Every single one of you post 9-10 words on average in almost every sentence.
3. Every single one of you goof up when using an ellipsis.
4. Every single one of you hard return a paragraph to separate ideas.
5. Every single post is written in expository form, usually past tense.
6. No posts from any character contain any dialogged format, "like this."
7. All posts are written at about a high school graduate level of writing.
8. The characters were beyond dynamic. They were as if they were different people and their monikers all were possessive Stormy's something or other and changed so frequently it was as if they were fabricated.
9. Nobody writes with someone else as the focus of all their posts unless it is to be critical. I can't think of any other poster that does this. Not even to suck up to Susan I/S.
10. Your characters have been in more than one place at a time and the story changes. For example in one post they see you on a computer and in the next post they borrowed your phone.
11. Life is pain. Anyone who says otherwise is selling something.