Checker of minor facts, thanks for your second verse suggestion---it reads truer (is that even a word?) I also made some other changes in my little poem which, I think, improved it. (yes, I can be obsessive.) Noticed that we both have the word facts in our screen name---right on. FACTS RULE.
And, Leaving, your poetry was fun to read----thanks for posting.
Made me feelsad for you that th
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